Liquid Edge
When my wife's wrist was accidentally cut openthe ocean crashed through the front doorand I lost her among salt sting and current's foam.A seagull's voice flew into my mouth. A lump of blood sank into...
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David, could you post this again? I think EZboard converted some of your text into gibberish. I'm looking forward to reading and commenting. Sorry about the technical difficulties.- Smikes
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Smikes,Yeah, looked like apostrophes got garbled.Hopefully this works. It's looks OK on my screen now.Dave
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The apostophes are still funky, but i was able to overlook them and be moved by the poem.There are great lines in this.The seagull's voice... shivered lips... The cheeks sunbleached...i can hear the...
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I think I fixed it (sorry about the Monster logo in the edited by field). I'll come back tonight and comment on this.
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All right, DD. Sorry about the delay...I have no nits, David, and that's saying a lot because I am a nitpicky bastard on critique forums.I would like to say that I think even though the speaker says...
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